Monday, 20 April 2020
Liam the ninga
Once upon a time there lived a ninga named Liam.His enermy was dr robot. Liam was the leader of all ningas.He lived in a huge fortris in a volcano!!! One day a bunch of robots ataked Liams base.Liam got his wepons and went to go fight the robots.He new how was leading the atak it was dr robot.after a few minits the ningas had to reatreat because there was to many robots.there wernt many ninga left.So Liam had to come up a plan so he did.So liam got all of his ninga to hide and amboosh the robots.When the robots came to there hiding spot there was nobody there.So the ningas ambooshed the robots from be hind and not a single ninga got killed. and even beter theiy capshored dr robot.
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Hi Ben
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story, I like how Liam was a very brave Ninja. Don't forget to use some adjectives (describing words) in your stories as that would help the reader get a really good picture in their mind about what the characters and setting of the story looks like. You are writing some amazing blogs, well done Ben!!
Sarah
that is soooo cool i love it because you included me!!!
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