Tuesday, 22 September 2020

A day In the life of a great white shark.

We are learning to write in first person. Here is my story...

A day In the life of a great white shark. 

As the sun came up I knew that I had to get some food. I swam to the nearest shipwreck to smell out some food because I can not use my eyes, because I am blind. Then after 10 minutes I finally caught a fish. I quickly ate it all, with my 3 inch teeth, before any of my shark mates could eat it. After I ate the fish a blue whale appeared out of nowhere and started to chase me. I swam as fast as I could to swim away from the whale. Then I hid  behind a rock. The whale swam away, out Into the distant water. I swam in the same direction. After a while the whale was captured by fishermen then I swam over there and saved the whale.

The end


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 October 2020 at 09:30

    Hi Ben. I liked your first person writing about great white sharks. I liked all of the facts you wrote. I never knew great white sharks were blind. What is your favourite sea creature? Mine is a Megaladon.
    From Liam

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  2. Anonymous27 October 2020 at 10:02

    Hi Ben my name is Mitchell I say there is 100. Cakes

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