WALT: we are learning to write in first person
One day I went to QEll with my family. As I got out of the car we went to the counter got a red wristband. Then once we got a wristband we went into the changing rooms. After we got changed me and my dad onto the hydroslide. Once the red light turned green, some water shot out behind us! It started to move the boat forward. It was scary going down the pitch black tunnel. After 2 minutes some light came into our vision. Then it became brighter and brighter then we were in a giant ball! Water started to spray at us and suddenly we turned around backwards and went into a black tube. Then we came out the back of the tube. It was really fun!
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