link in my class we have bean writing about the olympics and what happened so the link at the start is a link that leads to what i have wrote. Emma was in the fourth row. Then she started to row along with everyone else. She was in 3rd but then she packed up a lot of speed and she was in first. She was rowing heaps while still in the lead. There was the finish line where she won and there was a fish that came out of the water. The fish wiggled like a worm. The fish came flying out of the water. It splashed water all over Emma and the fish did not get a medal. One time Emma twigg lost by not even a second.
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Friday, 6 August 2021
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ReplyDeleteHi Ben this is Monty I am a student of NBC i like your information and all your detail maybe next time do not ask for comments if you were to write more what would it be
ReplyDeleteHi Ben I am Liam the report is rely cool I remember wen Emma crossed the line in first place I loved it maybe don´t say to give you a comment.
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